Love the guitar. It is soothing. Your haiku is inspiring.
AHH - so good and calm! I love how you play the guitar here - so clear and "simple".
Love also the wonderful haikus.
Really enjoyed this little masterpiece!
Pete Murphy is the one who first told me about FAWM, so I will always love him. Great, concise lyrics with light touches of humor (the mooning). Narration fits well, as does the slow strums of the guitar (is it the baritone? sounds rich and deep).
Excellent! I really like what you done with this. Thanks so much ayais!
This is great. Your words are sublime, they create a truly magical space in my head (and, of course, I hope the world's not mooning us is funny - in a lovely way). Your delivery and arrangement lift your creation to a whole new level.
What a cool spoken word song. The words carry a lot of gravitas and the guitar brings out the mood of unrelenting passage of time. Great moody atmospheric piece.