Something very soothing about your vocals here. They sound great over the waltz-like rhythm and the various acoustic guitars. Lyrics really paint a vivid picture of a romantic beach idyll. Love "we trace the outline of far away ships"!
Nice lyric, vocal and playing. Exquisite slide! Well done! You've created a warm relaxed vibe.
Oh, I like that 3/4 time - feels like the band that's playing on a hotel patio somewhere behind the two people on the beach. I especially like all the instrumental space for staring at the sea and each other and feeling content. Something about the way the vocal sits in the music makes it feel like thinking inside the singer's head. Great marriage of beautiful lyrics and music.
I too love these lyrics by Val. Your treatment is dreamy. I get a nice tropical feel with the music and a happy relaxed vibe with your vocals. A perfect combination all together. Beautiful collab!
I could have swore there were seagull sounds in the background, but the imagery and vibe of the track just magically produces them in my head. And the taste of salt water. And a very calm, beautiful place. Very well made, the music, lyrics and vocal.
Wonderful! The slide guitar, a waltz and this picture of a perfect day on a bay…
Perfect delivery! It don‘t sounds like you were in time pressure - it sounds totaly relaxed.
Great song!
this is wonderful! great and really poetic lyric and that slide plus baritone is just perfect for this, with that laid back yet tuneful delivery-- great job both of you! love the multiple slides (very late period george harrison!)