You can smell the popcorn, great stuff

Very clever, and I like the sort of carnival tones hanging out in the background.

Sounds like a demented carnival ... lovely.

Love the out of tune treatment clever succinct well produced . Great skirmish

It’s a difficult time for many, making a living wage. Liked the story and storytelling lyric. Nice skirmishing.

Such a modern spin on the old rhyme. Good skirmishing.

Oof! Very on the nose. Great commentary on today’s conundrums. Really cool instrument choice too, like Josie said.

I like the instrument choice and how the circus like beginning slips to the slightly discordant, verging on the manic.

That does update the penny-a-day story, and yet, the story never really changes, does it? Clever rewrite!