Nice lyric that could be interpreted in many ways. The baritone guitar sounds great and goes well with the baritone vocals. Reminds me of a slightly weirder JJ Cale.

Love all the space in this one.
Great slow pace; I can see the old dog doing the backyard rounds.
Nice.

I love the richness and warmth of your voice! The slow guitar melody works well for the slow and deliberate delivery of the haiku, gives the feeling like I am being bestowed ancient wisdom as leaves fly in the wind... phenomenal job!

Love your vocals ! Such a great mix with the baritone guitar! I dig a Bowie atmosphere here.