Release notes
02-19-2023
This is about how hard it is to sit still.
The second five haiku were released online as a batch on FAWM (February Album Writing Month), and the comments are repeated for all five. Thanks to Richard Masters as an early and continuing fan.
2023-02-24@richardmastersI'm a total fan of your haiku songs - maybe it matches my attention span :) These are all really pleasing and your delivery is just the right thing but #9 is a wonder for it's fluidity of meaning and context...and it made me laugh. The zen is very present in these songs.
2023-02-19@zebraphoneCool idea writing in haikus. Love these short-form songbooks, and they usually make me think of some musical character who sings everything they say. My favourite is #7, it made me chuckle. Nice harmonies - like you say, the shortform leads to lots of tweaking, which can be inspiring!