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Collection: shortsongs
H52 - thoughts are rattling
Lyrics:
thoughts are rattling
the tracks stretch ahead
get off at the next stop


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Release notes
2024-02-13
Thinking about travel
2024-02-14
@ttg105
Love the experimental weirdness and the maelstrom of voices. It actually sounds like a recording of what goes on in someone's head.

2024-02-14
@ayais
@lcad - the modern haiku is loose. 5-5-6, 5-7-5, 2-2-6, whatever works is fine. Only 200-year-old Japanese literary critics (and more recent sticks-in-the-mud) would quibble. Though 5-7-5 is fun to work with. Glad you smiled!

2024-02-13
@lcad
This made me smile
Your meter is five five six
Is it a haiku?